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This research investigates the grammatical construction and common logical problems in argumentative essays produced by Master of English Education students at UIN Syarif Hidayatullah Jakarta. This study utilized a qualitative research framework and content analysis as the design. The data collection involves a detailed syntactical analysis, facilitated by Shang’s syntax tree generator, with the researcher actively engaged in the evaluation and categorization of grammatical and logical elements. The main arguments are identified, and connections to the overarching thesis are established. Systematic coding is applied to categorize findings, encompassing sentence structure, evidence usage, tone, logical connectives, cohesions, counterarguments, and identification of logical fallacies. Findings reveal notable technical errors in sentence construction, especially in constructing complex sentences. Moreover, difficulties in understanding the appropriate genre in argumentative writing and logical errors in expressing opinions and drawing conclusions are identified. This study discovered that students encounter difficulties in maintaining a coherent and logically sound progression of ideas throughout their essays.
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Afdaliah, N., Uswatunnisa, U., & Marliana, R. (2019). the Use of Google Docs To Improve Students’ Writing Ability. Inspiring: English Education Journal, 2(1), 73–82. https://doi.org/10.35905/inspiring.v2i1.1266
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Khunaifi, A. R. (2015). The effects of teaching critical thinking on students’ argumentative essay. Journal on English as a Foreign Language, 5(1), 45. https://doi.org/10.23971/jefl.v5i1.91
Knapp, P., & Watkins, M. (2005). Genre, text, grammar: Technologies for teaching and assessing writing (1st ed.). University of New South Wales Press Ltd.
Kobayashi, H., & Rinnert, C. (2008). Task response and text construction across L1 and L2 writing. Journal of Second Language Writing, 17(1), 7–29.
Krippendorff, K. (2019). Content Analysis: An Introduction to Its Methodology (Fourth Edi). Sage Publications, Inc.
Lestari, S., & Nurhamdah, N. (2019). Improving the Ability in Writing Paragraph At the Second Grade Students of Smk Negeri 5 Pinrang Through Paraphrasing Technique. Inspiring: English Education Journal, 2(1), 36–46. https://doi.org/10.35905/inspiring.v2i1.1264
Lismay, L. (2020). Logical Fallacies on Students’ Argumentative Writing. ELP (Journal of English Language Pedagogy), 5(2), 21–27. https://doi.org/10.36665/elp.v5i2.321
Mayring, P. (2000). Qualitative Content Analysis. Forum Qualitative Sozialforschung, 1(2).
Miles, M. B., & Huberman, A. M. (1994). Qualitative Data Analysis. In Sage Publication (2nd ed.). Sage Publications, Inc.
Oktavia, W. (2016). Argumentative Elements and Quality of Multilingual Learners’ Writing. Proceedings of the Fourth International Seminar OnEnglish Language and Teaching (ISELT-4), 444–450.
Özdemir, S. (2018). The Effect of Argumentative Text Pattern Teaching on Success of Constituting Argumentative Text Elements. World Journal of Education, 8(5), 112. https://doi.org/10.5430/wje.v8n5p112
Ozfidan, B., & Mitchell, C. (2020). Detected difficulties in argumentative writing: The case of culturally and linguistically saudi backgrounded students. Journal of Ethnic and Cultural Studies, 7(2), 15–29. https://doi.org/10.29333/ejecs/382
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Qin, J., & Karabacak, E. (2010). The analysis of Toulmin elements in Chinese EFL university argumentative writing. System, 38(3), 444–456. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.system.2010.06.012
Shang, M. (2011). Syntax Tree Generator. http://mshang.ca/syntree/
Sokolik, M. (2003). Writing. In D. Nunan (Ed.), Practical English Language Teaching (Internatio, p. 87). McGraw-Hill.
Stavans, A., Seroussi, B., & Zadunaisky Ehrlich, S. (2019). Literacy-Related Abilities’ Effects on Argumentative Text Quality Structure. Journal of Literacy Research, 51(3), 315–335. https://doi.org/10.1177/1086296X19859515
Subekti, A. S. (2018). Error analysis in complex sentences written by Indonesian students from the English education department. Studies in English Language and Education, 5(2), 185–203. https://doi.org/10.24815/siele.v5i2.10686
Suhartoyo, E. (2017). The Importance of Critical Thinking Competence: An Investigation of Students’ Writing Experiences. International Seminar on Language, Education, and Culture, October, 34–42.
Suhartoyo, E., Ni’mah, D., & Ismiatun, F. (2020). The common mistakes of undergraduate EFL students in writing argumentative essays. Proceedings of English Linguistics and Literature, 2, 37–46. https://proceeding.unnes.ac.id/index.php/ELLit/article/view/526
Toulmin, S. E. (2012). The Uses of Arguments (2nd ed.). Cambridge University Press.
Tsang, W. K., & Wong, M. (2000). Giving grammar the place it deserves in process writing. Australian Journal of TESOL, 15(1), 34–45.
Wolfe, C. R., Britt, M. A., & Butler, J. A. (2009). Argumentation Schema and the Myside Bias in Written Argumentation. Written Communication, 26(2), 183–209.
Zhang, Y., & Wildemuth, B. M. (2009). Qualitative Analysis of Content. In B. M. Wildemuth (Ed.), Application of Social Research Methods to Questions in Information and Library Science (pp. 1–12). Libraries Unlimited. https://doi.org/10.1029/97jb03577
